Sample of my Story
Opening Scene
A mining crew from Sarasota Florida is sent to drill in Death Valley.
As they dig deep into the earth violent tremors rock the mine. An earthquake causes a massive explosion in the mine. Fire fills the tunnel. Two men are incinerated in the shaft while trying to escape.( Fire and destruction is symbolic of the devils rage.)
Volcanic lava spews through the mine killing six miners mercilessly. The rest of the miners are held captive in hells fiery tomb.
At the bottom an explorer uncovers ancient writing and what appears to be a dinosaur head.
Upon closer inspection he determines the relic to be the head of a dragon. After centuries of isolation from humanity the devils catacomb has been unsealed. The chamber is filled with bones and ritualistic tools dating B.C. Pentagrams, hieroglyphics and other strange objects adorn the tomb..
Scene 2
Camera, Hover Dam
Hoover Dam cracks. Nevada is seen shaking, alarms sound. (camera shows a control tower to the left of the dam. You see water seeping through a hole. Power lines fall and produce electricity. Nearby tourists are shown gasping in horror as they stand on a nearby ledge. Warning lights flash. The world is thrown into a total state of panic.
A news crew gathers at the mine. An attractive anchor woman speaks into a microphone . She is announcing the event to the world. A news truck reads: Nevada News.
A mining crew from Sarasota Florida is sent to drill in Death Valley.
As they dig deep into the earth violent tremors rock the mine. An earthquake causes a massive explosion in the mine. Fire fills the tunnel. Two men are incinerated in the shaft while trying to escape.( Fire and destruction is symbolic of the devils rage.)
Volcanic lava spews through the mine killing six miners mercilessly. The rest of the miners are held captive in hells fiery tomb.
At the bottom an explorer uncovers ancient writing and what appears to be a dinosaur head.
Upon closer inspection he determines the relic to be the head of a dragon. After centuries of isolation from humanity the devils catacomb has been unsealed. The chamber is filled with bones and ritualistic tools dating B.C. Pentagrams, hieroglyphics and other strange objects adorn the tomb..
Scene 2
Camera, Hover Dam
Hoover Dam cracks. Nevada is seen shaking, alarms sound. (camera shows a control tower to the left of the dam. You see water seeping through a hole. Power lines fall and produce electricity. Nearby tourists are shown gasping in horror as they stand on a nearby ledge. Warning lights flash. The world is thrown into a total state of panic.
A news crew gathers at the mine. An attractive anchor woman speaks into a microphone . She is announcing the event to the world. A news truck reads: Nevada News.
Fourteen miners are still trapped inside the mine. Our lead character(Kurt) is giving commands from the the bottom. He speaks to his crew member’s and news reporters by radio transmitter.
--------- Brief summary----
The earthquake has been caused by a paranormal disturbance.
An unholy presence has entered the world, a supernatural force that reaches into our subconscious mind and seeks to destroy every living soul on the planet.
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Kurt and his crew have unknowingly discovered Lucifer's tomb. The place Christ sent Lucifer when he was cast from heaven. This catastrophic event cause a planetary imbalance. Nature is thrown off course. Lucifer emerges from his fiery sleep amid chaos, fire and destruction. He brings mayhem to the world.
No man is safe. The Armageddon has begun. Every man must serve or parish during the evil transition. During Lucifer’s short term on earth he captures many souls. He causes hell and destruction and countless world suffering. The prophecy is fulfilled. This is mankind’s final battle. The age of destruction.
Why I chose Death Valley
Death Valley is rich in minerals, lead silver copper. It is a haven for reptiles. The devil being a serpent likes the hot dry climate. The volcanic mountains make the prime background for this story.
numerous poisonous critters live in the desert, spiders, snakes, scorpions. Fire creek and Devils Crossing were ideal names for this devilish story. Fire in the Canyon can be seen for miles.
Death Valley has mystified man for centuries and always been a forbidden creepy place.
CHARACTERS
--------- Brief summary----
The earthquake has been caused by a paranormal disturbance.
An unholy presence has entered the world, a supernatural force that reaches into our subconscious mind and seeks to destroy every living soul on the planet.
---
Kurt and his crew have unknowingly discovered Lucifer's tomb. The place Christ sent Lucifer when he was cast from heaven. This catastrophic event cause a planetary imbalance. Nature is thrown off course. Lucifer emerges from his fiery sleep amid chaos, fire and destruction. He brings mayhem to the world.
No man is safe. The Armageddon has begun. Every man must serve or parish during the evil transition. During Lucifer’s short term on earth he captures many souls. He causes hell and destruction and countless world suffering. The prophecy is fulfilled. This is mankind’s final battle. The age of destruction.
Why I chose Death Valley
Death Valley is rich in minerals, lead silver copper. It is a haven for reptiles. The devil being a serpent likes the hot dry climate. The volcanic mountains make the prime background for this story.
numerous poisonous critters live in the desert, spiders, snakes, scorpions. Fire creek and Devils Crossing were ideal names for this devilish story. Fire in the Canyon can be seen for miles.
Death Valley has mystified man for centuries and always been a forbidden creepy place.
CHARACTERS
Kurt Howard-Lead
Nick Henderson-geologist
John Henley*- Owner of Henley mine
Phil Jaggers*-Physician
Shane Riggs-the leads side kick
Kelly Summers*-anchor women. (Kurt’s love interest)
Jan Sin Clair- news crew
Pete Dougal- Priest
Kyle-opponent
Mitch Garner*-high profile
Ben Wallace-Expert
Haley Fay*-victim
Drake-villain
---Spooky elements in the story
Fire blazes on the river
Hell and brimstone fall from the sky Strange crimes start occurring around the world. The newsroom receives too many daily reports to handle. people claim the dead are taking their hand and watching them from trees. They say they can see the contempt in their eyes. They believe they are being followed by demons. Some say a powerful dark intruder which conceals himself from the light is watching them and trying to possess them. They believe the demons that follow them are from other dimensions. Evil that seeks to destroy their resistance and invade their minds for possession of their soul.
Evil destroys many souls during mans darkest hour.
Explosions occur around the world, Too many unexplained deaths for law enforcement to handle. Lucifer gains many recruits throughout the story as he rises from the netherworld. He seeks to conquer the world. He wreaks havoc on civilization with a blood thirsty vengeance unknown to man. His unholy order obeys his every command. They murder innocent victims and challenge Christ's strongest followers.
Plagues spread around the globe. Weird changes happen in nature. Lucifer wants eternal damnation for all of Gods children. He wants revenge. Luckily God is merciful in this story.
Explanation for opening scene:
The majority of the mining crew is burned alive during Lucifer’s wake.
Norman, Phil, Kurt and Pete stay hidden in a cavern below.
Kurt received a special metal from a close uncle in childhood that helped protect him. He is special
Nick Henderson-geologist
John Henley*- Owner of Henley mine
Phil Jaggers*-Physician
Shane Riggs-the leads side kick
Kelly Summers*-anchor women. (Kurt’s love interest)
Jan Sin Clair- news crew
Pete Dougal- Priest
Kyle-opponent
Mitch Garner*-high profile
Ben Wallace-Expert
Haley Fay*-victim
Drake-villain
---Spooky elements in the story
Fire blazes on the river
Hell and brimstone fall from the sky Strange crimes start occurring around the world. The newsroom receives too many daily reports to handle. people claim the dead are taking their hand and watching them from trees. They say they can see the contempt in their eyes. They believe they are being followed by demons. Some say a powerful dark intruder which conceals himself from the light is watching them and trying to possess them. They believe the demons that follow them are from other dimensions. Evil that seeks to destroy their resistance and invade their minds for possession of their soul.
Evil destroys many souls during mans darkest hour.
Explosions occur around the world, Too many unexplained deaths for law enforcement to handle. Lucifer gains many recruits throughout the story as he rises from the netherworld. He seeks to conquer the world. He wreaks havoc on civilization with a blood thirsty vengeance unknown to man. His unholy order obeys his every command. They murder innocent victims and challenge Christ's strongest followers.
Plagues spread around the globe. Weird changes happen in nature. Lucifer wants eternal damnation for all of Gods children. He wants revenge. Luckily God is merciful in this story.
Explanation for opening scene:
The majority of the mining crew is burned alive during Lucifer’s wake.
Norman, Phil, Kurt and Pete stay hidden in a cavern below.
Kurt received a special metal from a close uncle in childhood that helped protect him. He is special
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Scene European footage is shown in the newsroom of global destruction that makes the holocaust seem vague. Darkness fills the sky in Europe. Rampant murders occur centered around the occult with human sacrifice and torture. Half moons appear in the sky and various odd shaped patterns that can’t be explained. Some of the satanic shapes match the wounds on the victims. Wars and riots break out in every country.
Gangs and looters turn their rage on bigger cities. Violence escalates out of control. Something sinister is taking place on the planet that none can explain. An ancient order gathers in Ireland prepared to battle the forces of evil. They have awaited this war for centuries and prepared to see the end of time.
The Vatican and foreign world leaders meet from various countries seeking to interpret the global phenomena. Experts try to interpret the strange signs and explain the nature of every problem . The final outcome reveals the origin of the beast. The worlds greatest astronomers, theologians and philosophers cannot explain the meaning of many strange events. Religious people meet in synagogues and churches and the channel of communication strengthens. Secret societies come out in the open. Many observers have different theories about why the world is in chaos.
Darkness fills the planet and cries can be heard from all directions. None can deny that something unholy is taking control of the planet. Average citizens take up arms as the story unfolds and fight in the war of good against evil. Many people choose the dark side. Christ’s faithful followers have sensed the end of time for a long time. Helpless souls do not realize they are beneath Satan's spell. Most of society lives in disbelief. Many people have been blinded by the motion picture industry, the media and other propaganda. The corporate world has brainwashed the majority of the population and poisoned people for satanic power. Children have been programmed since birth to accept evil and ignore warning signs. (They are taught to see God as a fairytale, an ancient myth and fantasy creation like in a video game. )Satan’s disciples trained people to avoid realism. They are influenced by evil and feed their pleasure senses rather than seek the deeper meaning in life. Countless teens have become the devils zombies. video games and cyber pollution have trained them to commit crimes. Some entranced players become suicidal and even go insane while playing. They are playing in a secret world with demon predators with no awareness of the danger. Satan has been seducing people for years. His global army is massive. He didn’t build this army overnight. The government armed forces assist. The Armageddon has been in the works since the beginning of time. The devil has been trying to gain power since he was expelled from the kingdom of heaven. He has forever been defeated by Gods Warriors. He seeks children because they are weak and devouring their flesh feeds his demonic hunger. They are closest to God. Luring people through the fantasy realm has been the devils greatest tool. It has kept his presence hidden. Masterful demonic deception through entertainment. He has convinced the world he doesn’t exist for centuries. Modern technology gave him the power and the upper hand to enslave mankind. hIs power strengthened as his forces spread globally. His power bought politicians, judges, thugs, and every high powered person on the planet. All in the name of money. The dollar replaced God. He has been rewarding the world’s elite for ages. Those who dream of being famous fall neatly into his plan. People sell their children for notoriety in the final battle. People, lie, cheat, steal and do anything to have their way. Satan has severed family ties. People obey his command like programmed robots without knowing the consequences. Hearts are darkened and minds are blinded bonded to the Devil.
They do not know what truly awaits them in eternal darkness. Captured and enraptured by satan’s soothing lies they can’t resist temptation. He feeds their pleasure senses and breaks down barriers. He destroys their love and conscience. He turns them against themselves and humanity. He tries to destroy their sanity and connection with the real world. He seeks to disrupt their connection with the Holy Spirit, the only power that wards off evil. Being so powerful he easily programs unskilled minds through subliminal messages. He uses modern technology to control the mind and destroy mans heavenly foundation. He seeks to use modern science to destroy mans free will and connection to the divine by detaching man from his higher conscience through prayer. He visits people's dreams and sneaks into weak chambers of the brain while people are in a vulnerable state. He plays on weakness with great skill to inhabit lost souls. He is a puppet master, the clever beast. The internet is his greatest source of control. It leads to mans downfall because it keeps Lucifer and his demons concealed in darkness. He can visit most any home through
Gangs and looters turn their rage on bigger cities. Violence escalates out of control. Something sinister is taking place on the planet that none can explain. An ancient order gathers in Ireland prepared to battle the forces of evil. They have awaited this war for centuries and prepared to see the end of time.
The Vatican and foreign world leaders meet from various countries seeking to interpret the global phenomena. Experts try to interpret the strange signs and explain the nature of every problem . The final outcome reveals the origin of the beast. The worlds greatest astronomers, theologians and philosophers cannot explain the meaning of many strange events. Religious people meet in synagogues and churches and the channel of communication strengthens. Secret societies come out in the open. Many observers have different theories about why the world is in chaos.
Darkness fills the planet and cries can be heard from all directions. None can deny that something unholy is taking control of the planet. Average citizens take up arms as the story unfolds and fight in the war of good against evil. Many people choose the dark side. Christ’s faithful followers have sensed the end of time for a long time. Helpless souls do not realize they are beneath Satan's spell. Most of society lives in disbelief. Many people have been blinded by the motion picture industry, the media and other propaganda. The corporate world has brainwashed the majority of the population and poisoned people for satanic power. Children have been programmed since birth to accept evil and ignore warning signs. (They are taught to see God as a fairytale, an ancient myth and fantasy creation like in a video game. )Satan’s disciples trained people to avoid realism. They are influenced by evil and feed their pleasure senses rather than seek the deeper meaning in life. Countless teens have become the devils zombies. video games and cyber pollution have trained them to commit crimes. Some entranced players become suicidal and even go insane while playing. They are playing in a secret world with demon predators with no awareness of the danger. Satan has been seducing people for years. His global army is massive. He didn’t build this army overnight. The government armed forces assist. The Armageddon has been in the works since the beginning of time. The devil has been trying to gain power since he was expelled from the kingdom of heaven. He has forever been defeated by Gods Warriors. He seeks children because they are weak and devouring their flesh feeds his demonic hunger. They are closest to God. Luring people through the fantasy realm has been the devils greatest tool. It has kept his presence hidden. Masterful demonic deception through entertainment. He has convinced the world he doesn’t exist for centuries. Modern technology gave him the power and the upper hand to enslave mankind. hIs power strengthened as his forces spread globally. His power bought politicians, judges, thugs, and every high powered person on the planet. All in the name of money. The dollar replaced God. He has been rewarding the world’s elite for ages. Those who dream of being famous fall neatly into his plan. People sell their children for notoriety in the final battle. People, lie, cheat, steal and do anything to have their way. Satan has severed family ties. People obey his command like programmed robots without knowing the consequences. Hearts are darkened and minds are blinded bonded to the Devil.
They do not know what truly awaits them in eternal darkness. Captured and enraptured by satan’s soothing lies they can’t resist temptation. He feeds their pleasure senses and breaks down barriers. He destroys their love and conscience. He turns them against themselves and humanity. He tries to destroy their sanity and connection with the real world. He seeks to disrupt their connection with the Holy Spirit, the only power that wards off evil. Being so powerful he easily programs unskilled minds through subliminal messages. He uses modern technology to control the mind and destroy mans heavenly foundation. He seeks to use modern science to destroy mans free will and connection to the divine by detaching man from his higher conscience through prayer. He visits people's dreams and sneaks into weak chambers of the brain while people are in a vulnerable state. He plays on weakness with great skill to inhabit lost souls. He is a puppet master, the clever beast. The internet is his greatest source of control. It leads to mans downfall because it keeps Lucifer and his demons concealed in darkness. He can visit most any home through
Sherry Bretz
May 27, 2010 - 4:54AM
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cyber world. It empowers Lucifer to deceive mankind and infiltrate minds unlike ever before while keeping his identity and game plan a secret. His secret organization can seek out every light source and destroy vulnerable prey. He sends his assassins into every neighborhood to blend in and gang resistant warriors of Christ who resist him. Cyber world allows demonic forces to play with people emotionally and entangle them their web and strange power plays. Through cyber world people let the intruder into their soul. Satan buries the truth and tries to hide the bible from the whole planet. He marks newborns in their cribs in hospital infirmaries and seeks to taint the whole planet. He wants to be the only ruler on the planet.
(Lucifer easily works through drug addicts, dependent personalities and troubled weak minded individuals. Modern technology is used to enslave people with the help of society’s most twisted minds in film, government and the corporate arena. Scientists perform evil experiments and use the medical field to conduct nazi experiments to try and destroy Gods connection to man to create soulless slaves that have no trace elements of Godliness. Lucifer’s trained followers serve in his evil conspiracy to cause doomsday. People became tainted through time.
(Lucifer easily works through drug addicts, dependent personalities and troubled weak minded individuals. Modern technology is used to enslave people with the help of society’s most twisted minds in film, government and the corporate arena. Scientists perform evil experiments and use the medical field to conduct nazi experiments to try and destroy Gods connection to man to create soulless slaves that have no trace elements of Godliness. Lucifer’s trained followers serve in his evil conspiracy to cause doomsday. People became tainted through time.
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a mere introduction
sherry Bretz copyright protected © 2009
This project was started with my dear Mother in 1998' We are close. Strangely the things I have written about became reality. I have put my faith in God. My mother taught me to believe in God. My mother inspired me
a mere introduction
sherry Bretz copyright protected © 2009
This project was started with my dear Mother in 1998' We are close. Strangely the things I have written about became reality. I have put my faith in God. My mother taught me to believe in God. My mother inspired me
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